Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believed that the focus of government spending should be on building railways and not on roads. Although railways provide faster transportation for the commuters, I disagree that the people's taxes should be spend mainly on railways as roads are equally important in improving the life of the people.
There are some who hold the view that railways construction are more beneficial for the people and I disagree. Firstly, building railways are costly and developing counties might not be able to afford to purchase new equipments and machineries. more often than not, it will lead to another debt or huge loans in the world bank. Secondly, railways is only beneficial to the people living in the city In other words, those people living in the provinces will not be able to use the train frequently, but they have to contribute the same amount if money for its construction. Lastly, constructing railways means more houses and trees will be s=demolished and cut-down to make way for this new infrastructure.
On the other hand, improving main roads for safe and smooth travel of commuters should be the priority of the government. These main roads not only cater vehicles but thousands of trucks that brings goods and oil in different cities around the country. by building new roads and expressway, this will ensure faster transport of basic necessities of people such as food and clothing.
In conclusion, I belive that the local government should prioritize building more safe roads for all the citizens to enjoy and not on railways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...sagree that the peoples taxes should be spend mainly on railways as roads are equally...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'railways'' or 'railway's'?
Suggestion: railways'; railway's
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: More
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...in different cities around the country. by building new roads and expressway, this...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...y, this will ensure faster transport of basic necessities of people such as food and clothing. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05836575875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76791299299 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5250474103 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.181818182 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154722284667 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659207322538 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620074364494 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102349064191 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726545791916 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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