Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is considered by some that governments should focus on building railways and spend less on constructing roads. I agree with the idea that authorities ought to allocate more funds in railways construction as it provides faster and safer transportation than main raids and is less toxic to the environment.
The main reason why government budget on railways should be on top priority is because trains transport people from one area to another in less amount of time. By contrast, in roads, commuters faced difficulties such as being stuck on a traffic or being involved in a road traffic accident. Riding train saves valuable time that can be spend in increasing productivity of an individual.
Another point to consider is that trains are the safest mode of transportation by land. According to the recent study, recorded accident and injuries in railways are around 5 percent as opposed to the main roads which accounts for 50 percent. This only shows that trains offers assurance to the passengers that they will arrived to work without difficulties and will reached their homes safely.
Finally, trains are environmental-friendly compared to vehicles. Railways are operated by underground or on the land using electricity as the main source of energy. This means that there will be no harmful carbon monoxide that will be released to the air. Vehicles, however, produces smokes that is detrimental; not only to human but to ozone layer aswell.
In conclusion, I agree that the national government should prioritize building railways than main roads as it has more benefits for its citizen and the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrive'
Suggestion: arrive
...urance to the passengers that they will arrived to work without difficulties and will r...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
...d to work without difficulties and will reached their homes safely. Finally, trains...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19011406844 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0293899816 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7172145751 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183126883732 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623000980527 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685128795158 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111638293105 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752663363466 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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