Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a controversial issue about the role of newspapers in society. Some social workers state that, despite the widespread use of the web, newspapers keep their status as the main source of information. In this essay, I disagree with their point of view.
Let us start with the reasons why some civil servants consider newspapers as the major depository of news. The first reasons is that newspapers are independent on the Internet connection. Internet connection is not always available in remote areas, but, in contrast, newspapers are almost available everywhere, which gives it more importance. Another cause is that newspapers are more reliable then any other sources. Many news feeds in the web communicate the unauthorized coverage of events, whereas papers are double checked by authorities before publication. Furthermore, news editions normally publish fresh coverage of events. Newspapers bring what is happening in the region to the public, before Internet analogies do, since they have their own teams of journalists, who generally report the event as soon as possible.
However, some cyber users state newspapers are no longer the most valuable means of social information. They justify their point of view with the following arguments. Firstly, the number of people reading news online is growing. Most people prefer to follow the news by reading verified news feeds, because they can open them at any time on the smartphone. Secondly, many news editions release new issues weekly. Many people cannot wait for new release of newspapers so long, so they resort to news websites, which cover incidents in the globe hourly. Moreover, newspapers tend to be sold out. Many people complain that they are often unable to purchase newspaper issues at newsstands, as they are late, but with the help of Internet, they can always satisfy their needs in news with no delay.
In conclusion, even though many officials believe that newspapers are still the most popular source of news, I think that online versions are slowly outstripping in popularity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, whereas, i think, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2696969697 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72643253051 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7701943399 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5263157895 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315058452696 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913674232947 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495502335392 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168469463881 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589772275898 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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