In many countries , children are becoming overweight and unhealthy . Some people think that the government should have the responsible . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
In most part of the world, younger generations are gaining tremendous weight that is causing many diseases in kids. In my opinion, I support the statement in which higher authorities must take important steps to mitigate this problem but parents should also be held equally responsible for making the health of the child a priority.
The country's development depends on a better health scheme and its citizens are getting. Hence the government must take important steps to stop selling junk and unhealthy food to children. All the school canteens/cafeterias can be restricted from selling these kinds of food. In addition, strict action must be taken for those schools who break these rules. as we know that student spend most of their time at school and they follow whatever is being taught to them, so negative effects of frozen and packaged items need to tell at school for restricting the kids from eating them. Further, the health check-up has to be organized almost every month and the feedback must be provided to parents on the health of their child.
Apart from all the above, it is the exclusive duty of the parents to look after their child's health until they get smart enough to judge what is good and bad for their health. The harmful effects of all kind of foods like potato chips, chocolates, cheese, etc. parents should aware of them.
In conclusion, I would like to mention that it is the duty of the government to look after their people, and organizing health camps, imposing strict rules on the selling of the packaged food in school will be of great effect in stopping the kids from getting them. parents should also make their child's health priority and keep an eye on them all the time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80067567568 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46249951334 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5425076582 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624329361651 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287666949091 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314157004828 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042296723557 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104313497614 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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