In some countries, young people are living in richer and healthier condition but less happy. What are the reasons? What might be done to solve this issue?
It is witnessed that young adults living in some parts of the world are less likely to enjoy a decent life even though they are financially healthy. While the shortage of communication skills in the workplace is the predominant cause of this tendency, I believe proper methods should not be ignored.
On the one hand, It is undeniable that the deficiency of communication skills at work has led numerous people to experience a sense of unhappiness for decades. This results from the capacity of work, which causes people to devote time on performances and achievements, and spend less time communicating with other employees. For example, my uncle used to work excessively at his workplace in an attempt to earn money and did not establish any relationship between himself and co-workers, hence, he had to experience a sense of anxiety and depression due to the lack of communications made by friends.
However, in order to tackle this problem, I believe that several solutions can be taken into consideration. First, they should reduce the workload by taking a break and starting conversations with other colleagues. This would help them to strengthen the bond with each other. Second, participating in sporting events is also an ideal way for people to improve their psychological states. For instance, some companies in Vietnam often operate a marathon race, offering many opportunities for employees to be physically and emotionally healthy as they could get to know each other.
In conclusion, it is understandable why people still dissatisfied with several aspects of their lives, causing them to be unhappy. However, I believe that the mentioned methods could have a contributing effect on solving this problem.
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- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 95
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24548736462 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11017482659 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.308380463 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135926175825 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498105065721 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323604656614 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873834093839 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309085844021 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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