To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
I do not completely agree with the statement that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. Although the major cities may provide considerable information about almost all of the different cultures present in a country, but to gather plenary information and deep insight into the finer details of every culture, one needs to visit the other smaller cities.
The major cities in every country have become cosmopolitan due to rapid advancement of the science and technology providing easy commuting facilities. People are now more demanding in fulfilling their desires and in order to satiate themselves, they abandon their small cities and settle in the bigger ones, for higher education, profession and even for business opportunities. Due to this challenging and competitive environment, the values and ethics of their original culture are diluted and can't be seen as full as in the outskirts of the country. Moreover, due to a lot of immigrants from other countries to the major cities, it is sometimes hard to identify which societies are endemic to that geographical area and which are immigrants. An example of this is the Muslim society prevalent in certain parts of India, who are originally from Pakistan. You could find many enclaves of Muslim society and misconstrue that area to belong to a muslim culture, although it is not.
Also, if you want to see the beauty and aesthetic aspects of that country, it is beneficial to travel across the small, less important cities. E.g, In India, if you visit only Delhi, you will not be able to admire the bucolic aspects of India, which are seen in Kerala full of natural greenery, Himachal Pradesh - full of hilly areas and beautiful mountains. The people there in small villages and towns are still fascinated with their pure cultural and traditional habits.
Although major cities are helpful in getting a superficial overview of the different societies, food habits, dressing habits and professions, but they are essentially amalgamation and it is hard to identify the distinct characteristics of a particular culture out of that mix habits. So, I would conclude that to understand a society fully, one must travel to major as well as minor cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12702702703 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88390557845 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543243243243 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7728787654 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.923076923 118.986275619 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270063490679 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10309749707 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193304326885 0.0758088955206 255% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183040802332 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168844841761 0.0667264976115 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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