There is no benefit of zoos. To what extent do you agree with this statement.
Surely there has no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals the no benefits of zoos has always been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the no benefits of zoos for animals. Regarding this, I would like to say that it has benefits along with some no benefits. Let's delve deeper about this in forthcoming paragraph.
Looking at the darkest point of the zoos are more as compare to no benefits of zoos. Firstly, animals feel safe in a zoos because they can attain everything in it. Secondly, livestock injured with accident people can also take care of them in zoos. Furthermore, beast, birds are pregnent and they need specific care that time and government already arranged doctors for all zoos. Moreover,
zoos are the good place for all faunas. Moving ahead, people are doing hunting so zoological park is the safe place for cattles.
On the other hand, this essay has some negetive impect too. vivariums are not good for animals because they feel a cage in it. Furthermore, they cannot go outside all the time. Moreover, fauna has some specific time for go out side in the zoos. Secondly, they cannot get a new air in the cage.
Hammering the final nail of the coffin, I would like to say that, zoos are good or bad both points but zoos are more benefits for them because they feel safe in it. So government should try to make more and more zoos in our country, state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 421, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...s benefits along with some no benefits. Lets delve deeper about this in forthcoming ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... the darkest point of the zoos are more as compare to no benefits of zoos. Firstly...
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Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a zoo' or simply 'zoos'?
Suggestion: a zoo; zoos
... of zoos. Firstly, animals feel safe in a zoos because they can attain everything in i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rthermore, beast, birds are pregnent and they need specific care that time and go...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arranged doctors for all zoos. Moreover, zoos are the good place for all faunas. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vivariums
...his essay has some negetive impect too. vivariums are not good for animals because they f...
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...er, fauna has some specific time for go out side in the zoos. Secondly, they cannot get ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66911764706 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39809613066 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9094010684 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5555555556 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163777901867 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558716546781 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601276712855 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862489197325 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688977091449 0.0609392437508 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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