The mass media, including TV, radio, and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people’s ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
Audaciously repeated amount of time society came to this moot question, is technology a boon or bain? Albeit society being prejudice in nature can never concede either of these. Mass media, TV, radio and newspaper has dominant impact on people's ideas.
Media in a nutshell, is a niche platform to reach out to whole country, therefore they are the best mode of advertisement. From primeval time human acquire knowledge and awareness from stage performance, art, books and story-tellers. The seed of understanding in a child develops from the story they learn in early stages of adolescence. Society grasps the facts and figures that are reflected in newspapers and heard over radio channel. Nowadays social media is another platform where we shape the ideas of people's by putting various arguments and facts. Several Neurologist and Phycologists studied the human brain patterns, and have revealed that, a nature of a person can be amicably predicted just by knowing the habit of his adherence toward what media he/she use for awareness.
A human brain is trained to learn from what they see and listen. Let us take soft-drink examples, we all know how bad these are for our health, but we get easily influenced by the charming advertisements and start accepting that a soft-drink can help fetching you a girlfriend and cool attitude, is that correct? contrary to the same if we see the after-effects of soft-drink to our health in TV than we are assured with its consequences as well. Even if we take examples of famous sport and film star branding certain product, humans are adaptable to believe that the product is niche.
I totally advocate the fact that any type of media can influence shaping people's idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Neurologist seems to be countable; consider using: 'Several neurologists'.
Suggestion: Several neurologists
...by putting various arguments and facts. Several Neurologist and Phycologists studied the human brai...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
... his adherence toward what media he/she use for awareness. A human brain is trai...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to fetch' or 'fetch'.
Suggestion: to fetch; fetch
...rt accepting that a soft-drink can help fetching you a girlfriend and cool attitude, is ...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Contrary
...end and cool attitude, is that correct? contrary to the same if we see the after-effects...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01045296167 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7903382316 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644599303136 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1209836705 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.25397266985 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158942363242 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547664736574 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066155207394 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104438911122 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324413590387 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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