Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
Why do many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, physical workout is declined by people on their normal routine activities despite of have free time that consequences are associated with serious medical issues on person’s body. This essay will discuss the reasons of avoiding exercise follow by possible solutions.
To embark upon, technology have played a vital role to stop people from physical activities. It is true that gadgets such laptop and mobile are the main source of person laziness because youngster and adult both spend all their time of day in these gadget, that has led to number of diseases. According to Times, the eye sight of today’s children are comparatively weak because they site at front of computer screen on average of 8 hour a day. Moreover, we live in that era, where one have to work 10 to 12 hours day to fulfil their requirement to life. Therefore, physical workout could not be possible for person which causes them stress and psychological problems.
It could be rectified by giving the people motivation and benefits of the exercise. It is an individual responsibility to force themselves to perform physical workout. It could be possible by joining the gym, where one can meet to same kind of person who do not have much time in strict routine but still they do exercise. In addition to that, employers should focus on their employees’ health by giving them space in the work place for the physical exercise, so they could release their work stress and could be able to perform better job as well as keep their health and body in good shape.
In conclusion, technologies have eclipsed person physical activities, most of the time people use gadget which stope one to do exercise and working condition is also source of it, but by self-motivation and help with employers, people can do workout on routine basis. It could be helpful in term of good health of person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this gadget' or 'these gadgets'?
Suggestion: this gadget; these gadgets
...ult both spend all their time of day in these gadget, that has led to number of diseases. Ac...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...er of diseases. According to Times, the eye sight of today's children are comparativ...
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Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...ront of computer screen on average of 8 hour a day. Moreover, we live in that era, w...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...themselves to perform physical workout. It could be possible by joining the gym, w...
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Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sourced'.
Suggestion: sourced
... exercise and working condition is also source of it, but by self-motivation and help ...
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Line 4, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lpful in term of good health of person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91823899371 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75199457677 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8608922772 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237734967557 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801853356739 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546535856413 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155210189387 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354127061525 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.