In some areas of the Us, a ‘curfew’ is imposed , in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
There are certain places in the United States that set a curfew for teenagers, stating that they should not be outside their homes at a particular time except they are with adults, in my opinion, I think it's the best way to ensure that these young ones are well groomed and good morals are imbibed in them.
Our society needs young individuals who are well nurtured in terms of character. Most adults seen today are a product of their youthful years, so when our young ones are exposed to the dark, they experience a lot of things which are harmful. For example, it is at this odd hours that they see guys who smoke, ladies who prostitute and a whole lot of other things. In essence, they should be asked to remain at a speculated time.
Also, the rate at which evil things happen is on the increase and all these are done at night. Take for example, a child might just be out there seeking to buy something, and a robbery attack is ongoing, the police might come in and a shooting spree begins, this innocent one might get hit by a stray bullet, causing his death, which will in turn bring sorrow to the family members.
To conclude, whatever the government had in mind when they made such a regulation, I think it was to benefit the nation, and I am in support of this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: lot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, as to, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4135021097 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25787683408 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616033755274 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.8879175146 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.625 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187413683962 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773964482085 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443326303174 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998112536312 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316828624719 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.89 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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