How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage. What problems it cause?
The importance of people spending too much time on work than their personal life was always a debatable topic. Many people state that spending too much time on work is creating a gap between the personal and professional lives of the people. I profoundly agree with this statement and further in this essay will elaborate this with examples, and provide a plausible conclusion.
Working environment at some companies require the worker to spend extra time to meet the deadlines. Employees are forced to finish the tasks under extreme pressure conditions. The pressure from the company and excessive work load end up creating a gap between the family bonds. For example, working extra time makes people skip some important family functions or an outdoor activity planned with the children. This in return creates negative effects on the whole family.
There are myriad of problems associated with working extra hours. Such activities often require sitting all day in front of computers which effects the eyesight and also causes obesity. Long working hours can lead to depression and reduce the productivity of work. An imbalance between personal and professional life may cause severe relationships between husbands and wives, and often leads to divorce. For example, a person spending 16 to 18 hours at work cannot spend time with his wife and kids. It is therefore obvious from the above example that professional life will impact our personal lives if we do not have time for our loved ones.
In the light of above arguments it can be concluded that their should always be a balance between our working time and time which our families require to be spent with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, for example, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06137184116 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54271078754 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56678700361 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1873193604 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4666666667 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307334845598 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105316228624 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101340379585 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184202079812 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768521202871 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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