Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
With regard to the pace of alterations in the principle of universities in the globe, study to achieve high academic degrees has become tough to both impoverished and affluent individuals. For all the apparent greatness of studying at universities, it is subscribed to the view that it is hard to be accepted into these academic places.
Much as there are state universities, the study still needs much money, notably when someone is aiming to pursue a PhD degree. By way of illustration, those who are willing to study in an engineering-related major should consider this assumption that they must pay more than 4000 dollars per a month, becoming unaffordable for the majority of society, notably some of whom are living under the poverty line. In doing so, the academic society is being faced with a low number of university students. Consequently, in most cases, those believing in following their studies abandon their goals.
Technological developments seem to have been intertwined with the increase of knowledge. In this regard, universities are in need of more motivated and intelligent students which is as obvious as the day the number of those with these criteria is low. A shining example is that there are some who cannot pass curricula by no means which may be a justification for this claim, posing study at universities come across as a problem for teenagers who are at the age of 19 or 18. Thus, they suppose it would be more beneficial and wise, if instead of attending universities, they learned some practical proficiencies which could be assumed as the bedrock of any progress they would make.
In the final analysis, financial and intellectual elements have a relatively large role to play in causing ones to think that being accepted into universities is of difficulty. Indeed, the truth is that study at universities tend to be too challenging to be coped with. Under no circumstances should we lose sight of the fact that the more universities become free in accordance with finance, the more developments will be seen in all strata of society, and this is the duty of the state to provide financial aids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, still, thus, in most cases, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98324022346 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04752059748 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5447112211 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.230769231 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741998848684 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031667306953 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316184282476 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517432072832 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218104787455 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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