Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
There is a controversial issue about the optimal penalty for crime. Some police officers state that imprisonment can take this role. However, some solicitors disagree with them and think that prison is too strict. In this essay, I consider both point of view and agree with the idea of seeing jail as the best form of sentence.
Let us start with reasons why some police officers advocate that prison is the most effective punishment. The first factor is that its strictness commonly deters potential criminals. Plenty of law violators dread breaking social order, since they realize that imprisonment means containment in small room with other convicts for many years. Another motive is that it often helps the convict rehabilitate. A great deal of former criminals never perpetrate a crime, since they understand the value of freedom, as soon as they have served their jail sentence. Therefore, after analyzing these reasons, it is clear that prison is the best method to punish felons.
Nevertheless, some solicitors propagate that jail is not the best solution to penalize delinquents. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, it usually contributes to the usage of illegal drugs. Most newcomers learn to take different forms of drugs, such as cocaine and heroin, since former prisoners are interested in selling these drugs by making them heavily narcotic addicted. Secondly, it also mostly facilitates the spread of deadly diseases. Many prisoners develop serious illnesses, such as HIV and hepatitis, while they serve their sentence in prison, since they live together in a cramped cells in large number. As a result, after considering these arguments, it is obvious that sending people behind bars is not the most effective form of penalty.
In conclusion, even though some solicitors believe that imprisonment is not the optimal solution, I think that jail helps people change their attitude to violating the law for the above mentioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: cell
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29430379747 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68035359334 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598101265823 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1666666667 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9444444444 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18096966244 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491644512597 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553164563364 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102394332207 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452876361524 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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