You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you retured home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
- say where you think you left the papers
- explain why they are so important
- Tell manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir,
The an annual conference of my company held in your hotel on 7th Aug, 2019. I lost some documents during that meeting. I am writing to request you to provide support to get it back.
In your conference hall there was appropriate sitting arrangement when we had a meeting over there. I attended meeting by seating on the left corner of first raw with the blue coat and red tie. At the end of the function I went to meet the chief guest and forgot to carried my bag. It has very important documents and pen-drive with the data of annual report of the company which are very confidential.
As hotel have CCTV cameras installed, it would be very helpful for me to check the recording of that meeting time and update me about that bag. I am sure that, I not took it with me.
Kindly request for your support to get the lost bag and your prompt response.
Yours Faithfully,
Kalpesh Sangani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: The; An
Dear Sir, The an annual conference of my company held in...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your prompt response. Yours Faithfully, Kalpesh Sangani
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45180722892 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39768117525 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6825451936 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1818181818 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161508206016 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050322110753 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354190494289 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821761400832 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486513736254 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.