You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines about:
--Explain what happened.
--Describe your luggage and
--Tell them what was in it.
--Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to have your attention on the loss of my luggage while travelling with your airlines. It is disappointing that even ten days after the incident the issue has not been taken seriously and I haven't known about its whereabouts. I would request you to prompt an action into the incidence and inform about the progress made in its search.
On last thursday may 25, 2019 I boarded A215 Airbus of your Singapore airlines in Paris for Moscow and I took another connecting flight on the same airlines to brisbane. Fortunately, I had my passport in my hand baggage but all other documents including my university transcripts and diplomas were in the suitcase which went missing. The suitcase was black in colour and from the popular Don brand. I checked in my luggage at the Hilton Airport at the start of my journey and I was informed that they will be transferred to the next flight automatically and I didn't need to intervene, which is usual for passengers flying by the same carrier. however, they could not return my luggage on my arrival at Brisbane airport.
I have lodged a complaint to which I was assured that an investigation would be launched soon and they would be able to return my belonging by no later than may 30. however, till date there has been no response.
I would therefore, be grateful if could intervene and provide me with updates about how far they have made progress in the investigation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ram
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ssue has not been taken seriously and I havent known about its whereabouts. I would re...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... On last thursday may 25, 2019 I boarded A215 Airbus of your Singapore airlines i...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...se which went missing. The suitcase was black in colour and from the popular Don brand. I check...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... to the next flight automatically and I didnt need to intervene, which is usual for p...
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Line 5, column 645, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... passengers flying by the same carrier. however, they could not return my luggage on my...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...n my belonging by no later than may 30. however, till date there has been no response. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73962264151 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71786149259 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 290.88556701 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5894019931 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6153846154 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198493853095 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714255167862 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457333731623 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100536889793 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474033498607 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.