Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
infact, the factors which caused a characterestic to be formed has turned into a controversial issue as far as many majors in universities are allocated to research about this subject. leadership is counted as an attribute that is defferant between people. some peaple prefer to have a management role; whereas, some others wouls rather be an employee who has to obey the prencipals' prenciples. A psychological theories has suggested by experts which divides feature to two classifies the first is feacures that are appeared when a person is born, next is chatactrestics that are gained over the time. Although many people belives leadership comes naturally, I myself believe it is an achiavable ability as well as being independ. because our position contribute us to behave as an manager or not; moreover, parents have an effeciance effect on our personality.
Actually, family is counted as the most crucial small society that extremely influence us; in other words, childeren's future behavior comes from the approach which parent use it in order to train their kids. a person who have been taught to organize the tasks, will be able to plan for a harder situation; furthermore, when children have been obliged to dicide about their significant works, they can make desicin as a manager od a company.
Although family's behavior is counted as the most effective group that distinct the childeren's personality, friends have also a major effect on people character. For instance, my cousin was a membar of an art group that had a leader who tried to dectate to others, they firstly did't pay attention to him; however, over the time they learned to be just a member who follow the leader. considering the fact she participated in mentioned group for long time, she altered to a person akcnowledging others rules.
All in all, there are many hypothesize that reinforce or dismiss the expressed idea; albeit, regarding to my experiments, I believe leadership is a feature that is improved by others beheivior and our treatments. In conclution, I don't the mentioned claimed, because I have read an intresting article that rejects the fact that leadership isn't an accessible attribute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e that rejects the fact that leadership isnt an accessible attribute.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, as to, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11731843575 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93861121073 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1879361282 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.923076923 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.096958234561 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346363397533 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357209316178 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551284388389 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180968095627 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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