At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In recent time, the population based on the age group, some nations have higher ratio of youth as compared to the old age public. The benefit of this situation outweigh the demerits.
Among the various merits, the foremost one is, the country can grow fast which has energetic workforce. In production industries which mostly do exports of their stocks can improve the production by hiring the youth in the company. It directly effect to the economy of the nation. For example, the manufacturing units of the electronic equipment can produce targeted production on-time because of the healthy and educated workers of the factory. Moreover, government have to allocate less budget in health sector as compared to other countries which has higher small-agers and old-agers. The health issues chances are lesser in the country which has more youngsters. So, the authorities can allocate more budget in other sectors for development activities.
Furthermore, educated young people easily adopt the new technologies implementation in the system. For instance, to take a decision to implement the rule of online payment is not big action for the government as compare to the nation which has lower young people.
On contrary, experience people have more knowledge to handle the critical situation at any place whether the society or the industries. It is unquestionable fact that, youth has talent and power but they can sometime failed to take appropriate action. For instance, to manage the huge industrial empire required well-experienced and talented personality. For this kind of responsible post company can not appoint young person.
All in all, for progress of the nation youth is one of the crucial elements and country can grow faster. However, to maintain the proper society with moral values it requires responsible age group who has ethical knowledge and sufficient experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
... by hiring the youth in the company. It directly effect to the economy of the nation. For examp...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'technologies'' or 'technology's'?
Suggestion: technologies'; technology's
...cated young people easily adopt the new technologies implementation in the system. For insta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34113712375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87631640284 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578595317726 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0707588556 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132782144495 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426451510554 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419298782604 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798947237696 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478780236013 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.