Some people think that the amount of noise people make have to be controlled strictly. Others say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have opposite opinions on whether the noise should be made freely. Although it is citizens' liberty to utter noise, I think that they should not disturb others' normal life and work as a principle.
It is understandable that some people argue that they are free to make noise. It is obvious that in this day and age people are more stressful than the past due to the accelerated life pace. Under such circumstance, people tend to regulate themselves by doing some stress-released activities. Therefore, they tend to immerse themselves into singing and music, which can easily cause loud noise. Besides, in some countries, dancing on the squares with music from loud-speakers is prevalent and it is recognised as an important social activity, by which they can exercise physically and make friends at the same time, in spite of the fact that they may interrupt surrounding residents.
However, all activities should respect others and not disturb them, and making noise is no exception. One of the most important reason is that deafening sound not only undermine people's tranquil life, but also cause some physical and mental problems. For example, if people are exposed to the construction site chronically, which is full of noise made by diesel pile drivers and drilling machines, they might be susceptible to suffering from acoustic diseases. Furthermore, in public areas such as hospitals, schools and libraries, etc.,making noise will definitely exert adverse impacts on patients and learners. This behaviour is uncivilised and unethical, which should be strictly controlled by relevant departments.
In conclusion, although citizens are allowed to make noise as a way to alleviate or socialize, they should not disturb others. Meanwhile, the noise near residential areas and public service institutions should be strictly regulated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 537, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , making
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40689655172 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93346754999 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8930314153 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333511472573 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117336092491 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828735714474 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19791197097 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333388039883 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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