In the future, it seems more difficult to live on the Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planet to live, such as Mars.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that living on the Earth has been becoming more challenging and we should pour money into looking for other planet to live, such as Mars. In my opinion, this solution is not necessary.
There are reasons to doubt of plan to move to the Mars. Firstly, although the Mars has some similar conditions to the Earth but whether living organisms ever existed there remains unknown. We are still on the progress of research about this planet to get more understanding. And some recent experiments show that we even need to find out the way of production oxygen to breath if we have a long trip on this place.
Secondly, moving 7.7 billions people from the Earth to Mars cost billions dollars and we need to prepare a huge fund for this transfer. Furthermore, our government also need to arrange new accommodation for all citizens. We can image whole process may take many decades even centuries. while human race has been existing on the Earth millions years. Inspire of the fact that, we are coping with the increasingly harsh living condition such as over-exploited and depletion natural resources, lack of accommodation due to population explosion and densely populated cities, rise of sea lever
causes more land are being shrunk or so on.
However, scientist also insist on that future of Earth or survival of human race depend on human mainly and all thing can be changed if development of clean, green energy slow down global warming of the Earth.
In conclusion, I consider that the research for new planets is waste of time and resource and efforts should be concentrated on technology that allows us to live more sustainably right here on the Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89160839161 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64482929711 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0323652762 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264230002124 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852885195793 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997529710345 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150159683634 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918703285378 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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