Many people feel that urban environments and more unhealthy than they have ever been.
What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?
Some people believe, that living in the city is now becoming more and more unhealthy. Personally, I want to highlight a few ecological, mental causes and suggestions how to improve this situation.
At the beginning, I should mention, that not only various pollutions influence on the health of population, but also mental criteria in general in towns is particularly important. The most common issue in urban environments are vehicle emissions. While enormous amounts of cars are widely used for everyday life, staking in traffic jams, exhausts are polluting our cities. Breathing with this emissions is very dangerous, and even in mega cities, suchlike Tokyo, Seoul, a big part of the population wear special masks. Second, but not less important cause is more on person's mental health than on ordinary physical - overpopulation. many people agree, that they no longer do not feel comfortable in their places of living. For example, like many others I feel disgusting, while staying at crowded places and even feel scared.
In my opinion, to solve the first problem, one of the suggestions could be to go for bikes. Of course, many people would not agree with this offer. But by using bikes, we will cut the amounts of vehicle's exhausts, traffic and frequent accidents. There are already a lot of towns, like Amsterdam, where we can see positive changes.
On the other hand, solutions for overpopulation are still don't look particularly humanely. Simple promotes family planning and the establishment od one-child policy should be looked at the first place. To give an example, China has reduced the problem of overpopulation at few per cents, by encouraging families to have only one child, providing different additional taxis and fees for those, who have 2 and more children.
In summary, there are always some solutions for everything, but we should all think about them, not only a part of the society. I absolutely agree with this causes and measures and believe, that the best saying here is "If you are not a part of the solution, you are part of the problem". That is why I am trying to not use lots of methods of transport and simply go on my foot and take part in many projects, th may help our city to be a little bit more environment friendly.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97911227154 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80709356908 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590078328982 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6556137576 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.368421053 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1578947368 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239627753283 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632378925052 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496230995102 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119574000664 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290875119374 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.