Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no denying that the Internet provides people dozens of advantages, for example, we can search for a lot of information or communicate with others through the Internet. However, despite all the merits from the Internet, I consider the access to much information do create plenty of problems nowadays.
First, as far as kids are concerned, it is unnecessary to get access to tons of online information. Recent research studies reveal that the more earlier children use the Internet, the more possibility that they become maturity at such young age. As far as I know, lives in kids should be happy and free other than enduring the overload information.
Second, as the Internet proliferates, many people suffer due to living in the age of information explosion. Everybody has own opinions and can express all of them without hesitation, even it might contribute to Internet bullying. Many of us may receive negative online comments on us on purpose to attack us on appearance, performance, etc. And it really leads to the mass number of victims from Internet bullying, and they end out suffering depression or some psychological disorders.
Third, because of everyone having access to convey information on the Internet, it may appear some false information regarding to some issues. And imagine if I would have the desire to learn something from the Internet, but the sources from it are all controversial. I even do not know which to believe. Why do you think it is a terrible thing that happens every day in our lives? We keep being deceived from the sea of information from the Internet.
Finally, I contend that the Internet has own pros and cons, and it seems like its overload information causes many problems in our daily life. All in all, I would suggest that people should employ the Internet in an appropriate way to do the right things, instead of hurting someone or yourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'earlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: earlier
...Recent research studies reveal that the more earlier children use the Internet, the more pos...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... that people should employ the Internet in an appropriate way to do the right things, instead of hurt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, third, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.953125 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84424961271 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5537963725 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256177577695 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772221869687 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055488579147 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136321317245 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074533819045 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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