Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
The importance of alchool sales in a liquor store was always debatable and has now become more controversial. The significant influence of determinate points has sparked the controversy of this trend on regarding on selling liquor to alcoolics in recent years. It can be agreed that stores are not concerned about alcoholics. Therefore, this essay will elaborate how is important to know the rules and consequences around and how to prevent problems related to alcoholics and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why purchase liquor is not a huge concern to the sells venues but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that alcoholics people can cause a lot of problems to the society. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that the numbers of alcoholics people have increased dramatically since goverment allowed the purchase in the stores. However, shows that economy has increased in the same volume.
Nevertheless, there remains some drawbacks which might overwhelm the significant influence of purchasing some types of liquors, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that they are the most expensive drinks. For instance, 30 ml of vodka can cost more than 15 dollars. Hence, having a alarming impact on the person who is consuming.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the influence of purschase liquor in the stores have a positive and negative aspect from the stores and society being distinguished, also being acknowledge as an alarming concern that should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 294, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16858237548 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89629831242 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0156781534 50.4703680194 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28154764196 0.242375264174 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083757025716 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649335558504 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151401126264 0.151781067708 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592797963705 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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