Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is commonly argued whether the children should be groomed by their parents to become responsible and essential members of a society or they should learn social values primarily in school. while a teacher contributes immensely to the overall development of the kids, I firmly believe that the greater responsibilities for the overall training of youngsters lie on the parent's shoulders.
For the development of a progressive and vibrant society, training kids by their parents is of paramount importance. Firstly parents are the ones who gave birth and nurtured the child according to their culture and customs. Often children look upon their mom and dad as role models and try to emulate them. Hence parent's behavior per se has a great impact on the future behavior of their kids. Secondly, kids spend most of the time with their parents, which allows them to train in different aspects of life. For example students spend six to seven-hour per working day in schools, however, they spend the rest of the time with parents.
On the other hand many children love their school and admire their teachers. they try to outdo each other to impress the teachers and friends. Thus good social values are imbibed by them if properly taught by the teacher. Finally, schools and institutions broaden the horizon of thinking and intice the aspirations of young minds to become a better person.
In summary, while school plays an extremely important role in infusing good values in kids, I strongly believe, the prime responsibility lies on the parents themselves as they are biologically related to them as well as they spend most of the time together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05474452555 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68339524642 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7461057489 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136948587552 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04760394048 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473337629156 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881055180004 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460729696971 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.