Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development
As the demand for energy worldwide has increased, fossil fuel such coal, oil, or natural gas become the main source of developing country. The growth of exploiting natural resources leads to many kinds of issues such as environment or resource depletion. Using renewable power such as solar or wind should be encouraged because of their potential benefits. I firmly support this idea with many reasons, and will be addressed in this essay.
To begin with, there is no denying that the variety of fossil fuels is limited, especially coal and oil. While alternative source, which is renewable and unlimited over thousands of year in nature, can ensure for the stability in energy security and brings many benefits as well. To be specific, exploiting solar and wind generation can assist the nations, which are lacking of natural resources, import from others. Using the huge of renewable energy is the best way for saving government budged and diminishing fossil fuels dependence.
On the top of that, alternative energy suit for the environmentally friendly policy, especially reducing the amount of carbon dioxin, which release from many kinds of modern tools such as car or air-conditioner. While the exploitation of fossil fuels exhaust many kinds of fumes and damage directly to environment, renewable power ensure the balance ecosystems and human health. Replacing the fossil fuels by the alternative power, can assist the government in the goal of substantial development.
To sum up, alternative resources bring many potential in people’s live, it is the best replacement to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33858267717 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92588296444 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4088974282 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15752380039 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620465424724 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630941253534 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904668542225 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357382576732 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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