Children should always follow their parents' advice. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is a fact that family is one of the most important conditions in our development. Therefore, while some people think that children should observe their parents´ guidance, other claim that this is not always right. In my opinion that children should do it when they are young, but they should become more independent when they are mature.
On the one hand, because of the lack of authentication, the children cannot distinguish the difference between right and wrong. As a result, parents are the first teachers who will teach them about this. For example: a young child does not know that it is wrong to take things that do not belong to them. In addition, parents can also teach children about dangers, both in the home and outside like electricity is a very dangerous thing for children. Besides, parents are having more experience in life than their child, cause their age not as young as a kid. People who taught children how to stand, walk, run and encouraged them to go to school, most is their mom and dad. For me, my parent cannot best in other people's eye, but they are the best people to me.
On the other hand, I would argue that if one child wants to become mature not only for physical but also for mental, the independent thinking is one of the most useful factors for maturity because the children cannot live their whole life with dependence 100% into their parents. Parents might tell a child which career to choose and this should be the child's decision because when they grow up, they can realize that right or wrong thing and they want to do anything what they like without follow their parents' advice. From a social development perspective, if we compare the acumen between younger and elderly, it is clearly to seen that the adolescence can be more suitable than their parents. Therefore, if they continue to follow their parents´ advice, they cannot develop themselves to adapt with the social changing.
In conclusion, parents need to give young children advice on morals and safety, but not on how to live when they are older.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78611111111 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44910540483 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502777777778 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5097748625 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.866666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251935937035 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866400077565 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601896702368 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155580675433 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549484149625 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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