I agree with the statement that life today is more easier and comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in following eassy.
Their is no shortage of opinion on given topic. In my views, I am totally agree with the given statement. it is true that life is much easier and comfortable today than it was when our grandparents were children. I feel this way for two reasons which i am going to discuss below.
First of all, we can get education much easier than it was in times of our grandparents. now, students can easily go to the school, attend the lectures. it is because the parents can afford the fees of schools. this scenario was totally opposite when our grandparents was children. Their parents could not able to pay their fees due to weak finanicial conditions. my grandparent's experience is ideal example of this, when i was a child, my grandparents told me that they were very scholer in their time but due to financial conditions, they couldn't be able to complete their graduation. if their financial conditions was as expected, then they could be a doctor today.
Second, The technology nowadays has reached to a peak and therefore anything which we want, we can gather it with the help of internet. we can communicate with each other by means of social media, voice calling, etc. Mobile devices has made our life very simple. if we want to purchase anything then their should not be any need to go in market and purchase it. these things were not readily available before. All these things are developed in 21st century. For instance, when technology was not introduced, at that time people were use to invite each other for special occasion by visiting them. but now, people send invitation cards with the help of whatsapp, facebook , etc. if the technology was not developed, then the world would have been too slow in terms of transportation and services.
All in all, The world in more convinient, easier and reliable compared to our grandparents lived. we can easily achieve education as well as services like technology, transportation has improved for faster connectivity across the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, i feel, as well as, first of all, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8357771261 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74856289649 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9865932525 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9545454545 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317663207402 0.236089414692 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860688388747 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106423938684 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207811743792 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139651780676 0.0645574589148 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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