It is important to do play sport to remain fit and health. Do you agree
or disagree?
Health forms an integral part of every person’s life, and these days, involvement in sports becomes important to keep oneself fit and active. While it is believed that sports participation is directly linked with physical fitness owing to certain physiological and mental benefits, I agree with it provided that the participants maintain sufficient diet and have no body conditions.
In order to play any sports game, it is imperative to eat favourable nutrients that give the required energy. For instance, besides taking enough fluids, a person must also balance the intake of dietary fibre, protein and carbohydrates. Also, with the presence of a disease-free body, it becomes difficult to perform basic sporting activities. It is evident from the fact that a heart patient cannot remain fit while playing group games.
It is because sports encourage people to demonstrate their physical skills, flexibility and stamina through the strategic
movement of hands and feet. To illustrate, a football game involves not only a consistent running from one end to another but it also naturally motivates people to make hand movements throughout the game.
Another merit is a regular playing of outdoor games keeps people psychologically stable. The maintenance of health does not only dependent on physical relaxation but also on mental stability. A strenuous mind bogged with the workload and other personal burdens can be de-stressed when a person combines his/her daily routine with some sports activities. Moreover, positive emotions generated through personal and team achievements in games give ultimate satisfaction to people.
In conclusion, I concur that sports constitute a significant activity for keeping one fit and healthy only if the person has no serious physical challenges and take appropriate die
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'nobody'?
Suggestion: nobody
...pants maintain sufficient diet and have no body conditions. In order to play any sport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49642857143 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95777900335 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4768774252 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161645854148 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562385218068 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471681076013 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755761309652 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053765764623 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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