Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Emerging more crimes leads to more punishments. Some of the faults are just solved with penalties, whereas others cause hard-punishments. Here, I completely agree with the statement in order to aware offenders and warn others, those thinking about committing crimes.
A crime free nation might be said as happy living nation. Punishments considered according to level of crimes might be fruitful to solve cases on the behalf of justice. Suppose, a thief getting death penalty is unfair for him. Moreover, cases consisting murders, rapes, and massive drug supplies should be ushered in national punishment. Thus, other criminals might get aware and stop thinking about these kind of crimes.
Furthermore, emphasizing on this statement, by hanging offenders to death penalties, their parents might get shocked but this activity may leave a relief to those, who are thinking to do so in future and to their parents as well. For example, a rape case known as ‘Damini’ in India had not been solved from last 2 years, which really makes us feel ashamed about rules and regulations of Indian government. Not declaring of this case might hurt feelings of Damini’s parents and their expectations for justice. Therefore, criminals are getting more and more chances of doing these kind of disastrous crimes, as according to them they can get bailed easily.
To sum up, death leading punishments might be beneficial for having peaceful nation, but only after having punishments according to the crimes committed. Having this kind of country can usher in a huge change in thinking and equality regarding genders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25968992248 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77396198464 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6132697933 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0889912788024 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304260402528 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246920939659 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564480035978 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236333082022 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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