Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
This essay will discuss the parental expectations of their children to be successful almost always and its outcomes. In my opinion, it directly results in increasing their kid’s stress. Few parents are not optimistic enough to let their child grow from their practically learned failure but rather ensure their child never fails and I see this as a huge breakdown at parenting level.
Firstly, the children are deprived of their dream career and are forced to run the rat race defined by the social stigma. One such example is a 17-year-old who had much passion for playing guitar, got selected as a part of a National music band. His parents turned down his proposal and forced him to take up engineering as per their choice and futuristic success rate. This teen tried hard to cope up but in vain, he barely passed any exam and eventually was consumed by heavy stress of being a failure.
Secondly, the majority of teenagers are sent to multiple coaching institutes for rigorous training. This is now an upscaling trend that I could see of late. For instance, after 8 hours of regular routine at school, they return home exhausted only to immediately catch up with the next training center to continue the focus. Large numbers of parents are engulfed into the assumption of keeping their child engrossed with only academic goals without any distraction as this will only result in a better success rate. But multiple statistical reports have proved this approach to be a failure by almost seventy percent.
To sum up, I definitely do not agree with the parents inducing pressure on their children to attain success defined by them and instead of the let the individuals choose a lifestyle as per their aspirations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91095890411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60634213568 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2089167515 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241215821356 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762310500902 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656816709594 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156312606461 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636946747325 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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