You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the problems that I am facing due to the room partner and his activities.
I am a final year student of Integrated Diploma in Interior Designing and living in the Double Coast accommodation of your college with a fresher student. He is not sincere at all about his studies and other responsibilities. I have warned him many times but all in vain. I could not concentrate on my studies, which would affect my overall performance in the final term.
Firstly, he creates a lot of mess in the room every time by throwing rappers everywhere inside the room. At the time of cleaning, he uses to make unwanted calls to his friends living abroad. Secondly, he is fond of music and plays the Guitar at night times, which thereby disturbs me in studying as well as sleeping. Also, he borrows things of mine without even asking me. These things made me annoyed.
Nevertheless, I would like to request you to change my room as earlier as possible. I want a single-seated room in the nearby locality of college. It would really help me to study well for my forthcoming examination. I would be grateful if you take this matter into consideration.
Anxiously waiting for a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
John Woods
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 72, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...equest you to change my room as earlier as possible. I want a single-seated room i...
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Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sponse. Yours faithfully, John Woods
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85266110547 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651785714286 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5374379917 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221700197033 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555983863418 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612553219415 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104427278013 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719383947491 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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