More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and
universities in a foreign country.
Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?
In this day and age, it is a fact that most of the students have a tendency to go abroad across the world .This trend would creat pros and cons.From my point of view,the benefits of choosing the way studying abroad do outweigh the drawbacks
On the one hand, there are myriads of barriers when living in a foreign country that they certainly have to experience by themselves.It is a clear evidence that living far away from their family and beloved ones can be big challenging to them. Since at the first time ,they perhaps suffer from the feeling of homesick and missing their family a lot. And due to this , there are some students even drop out of school halfway. Furthermore,they have to take matters into their own hand from finding accomodation or paying bills to overcome some difficulties when encountering such as going through culture shock or language obstacles.These did enable their spirit to be affected much especially without family stand by them.
On the other hand, apart from some drawbacks, it has a tons of different benefits when following the path to study abroad.The first reason is that they can make friends with some people and enhance their relationships in some foreign country .They can broaden their horizions and enrich their knowlege when they have chances to be exposured foreigners ,Like for instance, they have a keen understanding of unique cultures and customs in that nation. Otherwise, they would have an opportunity to enjoy the ambience there since its vibe may be have a little bit differences compared to their country.Moreover,you know,the best universities employ lecturers who are expert in their field to teach students.In addition to that, qualifications gained from abroad can open doors to them so as to have better job opportunities in the future. Besides, putting the pescious knowledge obtained from going abroad into practice make them climb up the career ladder and get well-paid job alike
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In conclusion, Although it still exists some drawbacks for overseas students, we can not deny valuable things which studying abroad brought back for students .And it seems to me that the advantages would be more diadavntages and it is a good choice to study in college or university in a forein country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.032 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86644265026 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.493855804 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.875 106.682146367 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.875 20.7667163134 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.25 7.06120827912 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211898423963 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851256621486 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879993425673 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156592528397 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944047767648 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 9.78957915832 266% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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