In some countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that number of countries over the world are encountering economy related downturns and so it is more favorable to act to pay a heed to its own problems rather than cooperating philantropy activities to other nations . This essay consents with that suggestion completely because of profits it brings to each country.The essay first look at how such works can help country's development in other spheres of life as a welfare system or education and then discuss how these downturns are availed to country
In the world more countries should not act to give an aid to neighboured or needed country so as to solve its own obstacles or downturns such as healthcare internet safety or employment as well.Serving those less fortunate industries teaches people many lessons from other backgrounds such as community servises education involving problems and etc. For instance in changchun province of china renowed on its industrialised zones and half of manufactured products are regularly trickle product or goods down to other states as an aid ,however, it stops exporting and provide more facilies and choice to purchase on goods for its residents.
However such as aids one to another countries could be benefitted by sustaining other countries with demandy or needful products or goods. To add to this view showing human help to another can positively influence on countries economy and finance by providing new work facilities and job opportunities for unemployees as well as such charitable works can help set nations apart from the herd and nurtiring relationship among them.
In conclusion countries should not be lasted to share helps for countries in bad condition life or in poverty because it will bend over backwords them improve other spheres of life mentioned above they wouldnot have before and it will also boost dweller's chances of living in a good state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, so, then, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12703583062 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85212073378 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.099967763 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 262.333333333 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.1666666667 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.1666666667 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330998670486 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163961022255 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649131622184 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196869058839 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526921453108 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.3 13.0946893788 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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