Topic: Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that environmental preservation should be only the duty of government officials because the contribution of individuals is trivial. Personally, I accept the importance of politicians, however, I think that everyone should be responsible for solving environmental problems, no matter we are politicians or normal people.
It is undeniable that lawmakers might play an essential role in protecting the earth. In order for serious environmental issues such as global warming, violent storms, or prolonged droughts, to be addressed effectively, it requires numerous resources including a large amount of money, the special equipment, and the strict regulation. Obviously, only politicians who are able to utilize the power of the government and connect to other massive organizations have the ability to provide all resources above. In terms of financial resources, they could use the tax collected from citizens to invest in environmental researches as well as cooperate with some large-scale companies to raise environmental funds. Furthermore, they could formulate more strict laws to reduce the damage to the environment which could not be conducted at the individual level.
However, I believe that individuals also can make a huge contribution to preserving the environment in their own way. We have appropriate 8 billion people living around the world. Imaging each person only do one thing to protect the environment, we have nearly 8 billion actions. In another sense, if each person plants one tree per year, we will have billions of trees every year, which is an unbelievable result. In addition, the awareness of individuals is the key factor for the success of any protecting environmental programs. For example, if farmers continue to cut down trees in the forest illegally without realizing the long-term drawbacks, deforestation will be never tackled, although the government has posed many rigorous rules before.
In conclusion, I believe that environmental protection should be the responsibility of everyone. Only by working together can we preserve the environment better and easier.
- Topic In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution on land and water so people think they should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Topic In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution on land and water so people think they should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- Topic Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 665, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will never be
... the long-term drawbacks, deforestation will be never tackled, although the government has po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57275541796 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23860319315 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613003095975 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.395214101 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177945464982 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617287464866 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502422184639 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111081350554 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175486707973 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.