With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.
Do you think it is important to protect animals? what measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
Several wildlife species are facing the danger of being extinct due to the rise in human activities such as poaching, urbanisation and cutting down of trees human habitation. This is causing loss of their habitation and some are being pushed to the verge extinction. In my opinion, wildlife conservation should be one of the paramount responsibilities, since ecological imbalance could adversely affect humans as well.
For many centuries, human beings and animals have lived in harmony, as a result, the former was able to hunt for food and create homes for themselves. However, the extinction of animals can be detrimental to the human species, therefore, it is imperative to protect them. Furthermore, if a certain species go extinct this would adversely affect the natural food chain and indirectly cause harm to the people as well. To illustrate it further, a predatory species such as a fox is hunted down, there will be an increase in the number of rabbits, which can eat saplings and seeds and destroy crops. There is a symbiotic relationship that we all share with nature. Humans are encroaching animal habitat for building their houses many trees are cut down for construction. Thus, they are unable to protect themselves and it is our responsibility to conserve them.
Pursuing this further, the government should prohibit land development in areas where endangered species are living. That location which is inhabited by wildlife should be considered as 'green belt' by law and there should be a penalty for construction or poaching activity. Additionally, strict laws should be passed against poaching and guards should be placed to protect places where there is wildlife habitation. Illegal hunting for sport should be banned, which will save many species and harsh punishment should be given to those involved in killing animals. Finally, People should support animal rights groups by donating or taking responsibility for looking after food and medicine cost of animals that threatened by human activities such as illegal game hunting. This can help save many species from starvation and protect them from hunters.
To sum up, protection of wildlife is vital because they cannot save themselves from the increasing human activities that are threatening them, moreover, animal species help find many medical cures. Humans should take more steps to save endangered species or they will be lost to us forever. Government and individuals can work towards conservation and saving animals who are endangered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3042394015 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85340620629 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533665835411 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0079631963 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.947368421 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1052631579 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260057562331 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876068625946 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393615357636 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165343252323 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478698287412 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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