some people say that e-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
There is no doubt, technology is flourishing day by day.it has been giving numerous benefits to people.it has been observed by a fair amount of people,paper-centric newspaper and magazines usage will be vanished by technology in the upcoming time. I partially agree with this statement, my viewpoints will be given in the following paragraphs.
To embark on, it is deniable that conventional newspapers and magazines are the richest sources of information. Earlier, people had the curiosity to read a newspaper in the morning with a cup of tea, it was the first and foremost task which was being done by them before starting the day. even some people do today as well. with some flip of pages, they were able to enrich their knowledge about global happenings.
Moreover, newspapers provide knowledge about different arena like health care, cosmetics, home remedies, fashion, entertainment in their supplements which is provided at weekends. it is portable and one can easily carry in his bag during travelling. one of the most important benefit, not only factual information is provided in it, but also viewpoints and opinion are being provided by experts in the editorial section.
however, in the contemporary era, modern technology i.e. e-newspaper and e-magazine also have it own pace among people. Nowadays people are busy in their life and they do not have time to read a newspaper, therefore they can read e-newspaper on mobile during leisure time, helps them to brim with knowledge and self-confidence.besides that, an abundance of news applications have been launched which also saves the precious time of people. although, it has also several benefits, also poses a threat to physical health and cause too many chronic diseases like obesity, myopic etc.
To conclude, everything in-universe has pros and cons. thought technology has come out with blessings, yet some drawbacks are long lasted.while printed newspaper and magazines are economical, handy, also has the return value and create sustainable knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, even so, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33644859813 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11486913375 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.8310420525 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.357142857 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177146730759 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619753850796 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559632760388 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949208162314 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436673198497 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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