The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.
What are the causes of this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Since the number of production has increased it has posed a serious threat for all humanity. However, the rise of consumer goods creates an enormous danger for the entire natural environment on Earth. This essay will discuss the causes associated with this phenomenon to the environment and what can be done with that and propose some viable solutions to it.
Firstly, the main reason of current problem is overpopulation of our planet. In other words, the number of people has rapidly increased since the 19th century and it has become a huge issue nowadays. Therefore, if we reduce the number of people in cities, the problem will be solved by itself. For example, the scientists from the University of London have found that the population on our planet has risen by 300 percent since the 19th century and nowadays our planet is overpopulated by 35%. Thus, If people had not reproduce so quickly, the problem would not have existed.
Secondly, the best route to resolve that issue is to decrease the number of humans who lives in the cities. It means that, as soon as people start living in villages, the need for merchandize will disappear immediately. Likewise, people will live happier and better in the countryside because there is fresh air, no exhaust gases and fresh food directly from their own garden. For instance, my grandmother has lived all her life in the country breathing fresh air and eating food that she grew and now she is 85 years old and she feels great, which is not true of grandmothers who live in cities. Hence, this solution is the best due to the fact that people’s life expectancy will soar and it will not contaminate the environment.
To conclude, this essay has discussed feasible solutions regarding the problem connected to threat to the environment due to mass production needs for humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reproduced'.
Suggestion: reproduced
...pulated by 35%. Thus, If people had not reproduce so quickly, the problem would not have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90705128205 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63426248494 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.938061715 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.357142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212347660935 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683478739002 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865586417513 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151531336315 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132768426938 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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