As a part of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a widely held belief that students should study abroad for the purpose of language acquisition and multi-cultural knowledge. I strongly agree with this opinion for the following reasons.
From a professional standpoint, overseas education might be perceived as a much-need boost in employability. In an increasingly globalized world, recruiters, particularly those of multinational corporations, are looking for candidates with outstanding communication skills relevant to foreign languages. Therefore, the evidence of individuals exhibiting the ability to establish a linguistically smooth and culturally appropriate conversation with a foreign partner is likely to raise their stock as potential candidates. This edge over other applicants is hoped to translate into more promising job opportunities with higher salaries and other relevant benefits and in the future.
From a social perspective, spending time in a foreign country plays a pivotal role in widening one’s horizons. For instance, by transferring to a different country for a semester, students are likely to acquire a deeper understanding of the new language as well as etiquettes embedded in the culture of the host country. In an age of of dizzying cross-cultural contacts, this is obviously a critical attribute that young adults should possess. In this regard, exposure to a new culture is a prerequisite for the development of a multicultural perspective which will render young people more understanding and respectful towards those coming from different backgrounds.
To conclude, I hold a firm belief in the idea of studying abroad for the sake of linguistic and cultural acquisition. In the long run, a temporary stay in another country might benefit young people both in career and social terms.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66914498141 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42392703639 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1139673367 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.083333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146205748629 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052989247783 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417842756485 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899873954346 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444678609678 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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