One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development it outweigh the disadvantages
In this era, technology has been being accelerated by leaps and bounds, owing to that, there are much improvement in medical field, also plethora of medicine available to fight against any diseases. Only of the out -turn of improved medical care service is that people are living longer and life anticipation is increasing. I think merits and demerits are both similar in development of medical science.
To embark with, population has been mushrooming, because of medial care is improved, also life expectancy is become long lasting. There are plethora of improved in pharmaceutical stream : better equipment ; medial care and doctors are becoming more intelligent what happens percent get through new equipment. Because of that, people are loving and cross hexagon generous stage. For an example, in past people were dying those diseases they could not make medicine , due to that, lot people had dead in past vis -a` - vis at present. Moreover , people were suffering from plague diseases in a century ago and they had given much money their selves save from plague but now people get easily medicine and injection of plague because of that, people's life becoming long lasting.
On the other hand , people had been living more compared to present time, because fast and for most reason was air pollution - in past air was cleaned and without harmful gas, because,many elders are suffering from asthma , exhale and lung cancer yet compared to past owing to this, people were living healthy and log life. For epitome of this, people ate healthy food , vegetables and clean and minerals water they had drunken in past, because of that they did not need beetle medical services.
To conclude, there are many merits of developed pharmaceutical filled to mitigate the problem related to diseases and people live long life, but increasing air population from that many diseases made by air because life expectancy is decline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16932907348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55729454906 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565495207668 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.3298897263 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.090909091 106.682146367 138% => OK
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Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.106321271595 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685793070026 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168387288892 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644210310572 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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