Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison.
What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?
Many people believe incarceration may be the best solution for criminals. However, after rehabilitating, they tend to re-offend. In this essay, its causes and resolutions will be examined in the following paragraphs.
One of the reasons for recidivism is that before committing a crime, one has had plenty of suffering. Because they might not get help from people with the right insight and compassion; so when adversity appears, they do not have the ability or support from others to transform it. And thus they become a victim of a negative environment. Furthermore, the outside conflict can not be done with a healthy mind, and crime is frequently committed by an individual full of conflicts from within.
On the other hand, many people believe execution or imprisonment can deterrent these re-offenders, paradoxically justice always comes after a crime, and society will continue to produce more people like this. So the way out possibly is in. Therefore, if their neighborhood and family help them to solve their affliction from inside, they will be transformed into blissful citizens. Seeds of the truth, goodness, and beauty in their store consciousness need water to grow, and so do with a criminal mind because human beings become what they consume. As they eat non-suffering foods, listen to peaceful talks or read meaningful books, and so on, they could not become rapists or murder again. Besides that, a community should help them to stop watering the seeds of anger and violence in their mind, such as pornography, violence films or any conflicting environment; happiness consequently will be contagious and transform the negative seeds both without and within
In brief, evil is inevitable in life. Nevertheless, human beings could transcend it to a civilized community, as long as we comprehend the root causes are laid deep inside each individual’s mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, in brief, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24503311258 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99783557141 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632450331126 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8385732893 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183791914653 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601154395366 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312443541242 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998095548264 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489572599133 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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