You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Ali,
Hope this letter finds you in best health. I have received your letter about asking for advice about going to college or geting a job. It is a matter of pleassure for me that you have asked me for advice. I would recommend you to get a job.
First of all, as I know you pretty well, I am sure that it would not be a great idea for you to join college because you have been in studies since 16 years continously and I do feell that it is the right time to take a break. Moreover, I have learned in my professional career of Engineering that it is ususally a good idea to take a break in studies before going for masters. I would say that get a job and see that what inspires you the most in professional career and then you can decide for pusuing further studies or not.
I suggest you to try your luck in Engineering service provider companies where you will get a lot of learning oppoutunities and you will have an interaction with customers so that will help you in building soft skills as well alongwith technical skills.
I hope this helps you.
Best Regards,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 28, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
Dear Ali, Hope this letter finds you in best health. I have received your letter abo...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s as well alongwith technical skills. I hope this helps you. Best Regards, ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, then, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30097087379 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45318116768 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8020049873 44.8134815571 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328314687983 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149025648209 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106152207083 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206544461667 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123321915652 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.