How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting?
Telecommuting plays a vital role in our modern lives. Undeniably, telecommuting has a far-reaching influence on the way we see the world, and its effect is often positive. It seems that telecommuting provides humankind with a suitable source by which they can be more dynamic. The present essay will seek to discuss that telecommuting is a blessing for at least two main reasons.
First and foremost, telecommuting can help people who want to prevent from spreading numerous diseases. For one thing, humans are the source of myriad contagious germs. For instance, COVID-19 is one of the recent pandemics throw worldwide, which infected more than a million people and killed a hundred thousand of us. It could be prevented easily by wearing a mask and keeping a distance from others. With working from home, the communications between colleges became minimized, and the chance of getting contaminated became lower.
Another thing is that working from home can enhance our efficiency. An example can help clarify the point. In many large cities, most of the employees ' time is getting waste during come and goes to their offices. It can quickly be diminished by telecommuting from their houses. As a worker, if they work in a comfortable atmosphere, they will work better and faster.
To sum up, telecommuting can bring many new things to the community. However, the question is: Can telecommuting improve the health and happiness of people in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, telecommuting will continue to move forward.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...many large cities, most of the employees time is getting waste during come and go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, another thing, at least, for instance, in general, for one thing, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13545816733 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96518745269 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7822726083 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.8235294118 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148624411735 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500325184331 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477413106055 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999917153862 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491151804009 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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