Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree?
Few people believe that the popularity of books, as the only door to data and amusement is fading off. Even though books are considered primitive nowadays, I think that books are an inseparable part of education.
On the one hand, books are considered to be the backbone to a country’s education system. Health professionals advise children from a young age to start reading books. Not only does this provide knowledge but also help children in speaking and understanding a language better. Book reading does not pose any harm to eyesight as well. Activity books are of huge popularity among elementary school children, since these comprise a plethora of fun tasks. Also, seniors, who find it difficult to adapt with the technological advancements, move on with the traditional way of book reading, which, in turn, is a very good pastime for them.
On the other hand, due to the advancement in technology, one can find anything through the internet. The internet serves as an ocean of information that can be retrieved by a single click.This saves time and effort and is a more convenient method as people can gather the information needed at any time through the electronic smart devices they carry, with no additional costs. Movies, news or even simple inputs on cooking can be obtained through the modern search engines such as google or YouTube.
To conclude, in spite of the fact that the traditional book reading is becoming less attractive as the entry door to information and entertainment, reading books are the key to a healthier and intelligent young generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i think, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0572519084 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89972108635 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2569157093 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12054152018 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407036295583 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377493788639 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788195208671 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299136382775 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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