Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Sport is utmost essential for the mental as well as the physical development of an individual. There are split opinions regarding dangerous sports. Some believe that extreme sports should be forbidden; whereas, another group of thinkers reckon that they are independent in selection. From my point of view, both, however, has own values that will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
Examining the former opinion, the primary argument of dangerous sports could be put forth. The first and foremost one is health. To explain, their health is the greatest asset for them, so sports that put it at risk should not be allowed. For instance, formula one racing sport has a fear of an accident. Not only that but also it is selfish to risk one's life for pleasure. What is more, there is a threat of lifetime defect that costs a lot to heal. Thus, by preventing a dangerous sport, to certain extent, the menace of health can be avoided.
On the contrary, the latter view suggests that extreme sports give people the opportunity to challenge themselves physically and psychologically; as a consequence, they become stronger from both aspects. Moreover, if they take part in such competition at the international level and they win, it helps the player to create a unique identity; therefore, ultimately it can be proud of their nation. Hence, the ban will certainly disappoint them.
To conclude, some sports can pose serious dangers to human life; they, therefore, should do lots of practice before taking part in-game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nly that but also it is selfish to risk ones life for pleasure. What is more, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75161145209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5148631717 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283939586745 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825072606373 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061892385054 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161461340405 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459621639797 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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