Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
In order to look after their child guardians ought to have some knowledge and prior experience. In regards, some masses go through a course to raise their children. But I disagree with the notion that these courses should be compulsory.
On the other hand, usually, government provides such courses free of cost especially for them whose children are disabled from birth. For instance in order to understand the gesture of dumb child, guardian ought to have prior experience. In addition, after the birth of a child it could be troublesome to understand the need of child. Individuals need to be aware with vaccination, child issues and their common habits primarily.
On the other hand, In order to provide this compulsive training government have to secure a large amount which might be difficult to some nation who has counts in millions. In addition, some people works long hour to manage their livelihood and this could be difficult for them to manage time for such training. However, these training might not fulfill the every aspect of need and moreover, due to the advancement, people might opt other sources as well for instance there are ample of videos available on you tube through which one can easily familiar with needs of child.
In conclusion, I believe that this training course might be proven as boon for masses and they can take advantage of this. However, in contrast, I do believe that making this training compulsive might affect parents and government both if time and money is considered respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02745098039 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62484506417 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545098039216 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5759283861 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201721989631 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827219477589 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644472171938 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129757688716 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394848862274 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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