It's argued by some people that majority of the people doesn't tend to show their interest to protect environment from various factors that cause damage to it. In general, not all people agree with this argument. But, I strongly agree with the argument due to various following reasons.
One of the most compelling reason that hold my view is pollution created by vehicles. In the developing world People are getting used to sedentary life and showing less interest towards the use of bicycle or public transport. For instance, if a person want's to go to near by supermarket which is walkable distance he/she can make use of bicycle. But, majority of the people are using the motor vehicles. which in turn some how effects the environment by causing global warming or drying up or oil wells.
Additionally, due to increase in population most of the cities need to accommodate more number of people. As as result the expansion happens by either clearing forest area in or around the city. Which automatically effects the environment resulting in global warming by increasing in temperatures and many other unusual natural calamities to occur. This all happens due to the negligence of higher authorities who are people.
In conclusion, most of the people doesn't care about the nature and worst effects caused in environment. However, very few people take an initiative regarding the environmental issues people are not showing up any special interest up on the campaigns. Therefore, I completely agree that majority of the humans doesn't bothered about the environment and it adverse effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...or instance, if a person wants to go to near by supermarket which is walkable distance ...
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Suggestion: Which
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: SOME_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...using the motor vehicles. which in turn some how effects the environment by causing glob...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: As
...d to accommodate more number of people. As as result the expansion happens by either ...
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Suggestion: who is a are
...to the negligence of higher authorities who are people. In conclusion, most of the ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
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...etely agree that majority of the humans doesnt bothered about the environment and it a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12260536398 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79878697928 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6015677878 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186933210161 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650813587836 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069908029443 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113261379606 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787288931725 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.