Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In last decade, the expansion of space travel has increased dramatically. However, some people argue that there should be air travel constraints due to severe pollution caused by it and planes require the world’s fuel resouces. I completely disagree with this assertion because many international businesses rely on such a resource and air travel produces less pollution than manufacturing firms and cars.
Not only does the globalization have increased, but also the import and export of goods by foreign companies across the globe. Such exchange of products also includes essential goods which might be important for some nations. Limiting air voyage would cause serious obstacles for the businesses to provide the its commodities. Consequently, businesses will not be able to achieve what they started for and it will also harm the country economically. For example, the GDP of China declined drastically during air travel restrictions due to Covid-19 and many businesses ran bankrupt.
Furthermore, it has been said by many researchers that production companies and fossil fuel cars contributes higher in global warming. Raw materials used in manufacturing induestries releases hazardous gases which pollutes the environment in the worst way possible. Moreover, the usage of petrol and diesel cars has rapidly increased that produces green house gases which is considered the biggest factor of serious pollution. So, restricting such firms and vehicles would significantly help to decrease the level of pollution. To illustrate, during the odd-even plan execution in New Delhi, the level of pollution declined heavily.
To conclude, air travel restriction to control pollution would result in troublesome consequences for nations and individuals. However, other measurements such as production and fossil fuel cars constraints would be helpful in reducing the danger of global warming.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6701754386 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0427223721 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1724197497 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268458132379 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798134326448 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782768223113 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161421894196 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955330062835 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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