It is important for all towns and cities to have large outdoor public spaces such as squared and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Many people claim that the construction of large public spaces such as squares and parks is very crucial. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement as the presence of these projects could bring about several benefits.
To begin with, creating open spaces would help improve the quality of life of inhabitants of urban locations by much required relief from the suffocating urban landscape dominated by built-up structures or skyscrapers. These places with views of open skies, and gardens laden with greenery can render a relaxing environment and let people experience a healthy lifestyle. For example, it is estimated that each year well over half the UK population make more than 2.5 billion visits to urban green spaces to enjoy themselves. Besides , public spheres aso open a new ability for people to express themselves fully. This might involve meeting new people, rekindling with old friends or participating in activities in the space. Namely The Bean Sculpture in Chicago is a great example of where people are comfortable to interact with the objects while bringing out the best in people.
Another advantage is that a high-quality public environment can have a significant impact on the economic life of urban centres, and is therefore an essential part of any successful regeneration strategy. As towns increasingly compete with one another to attract investment, the presence of good parks, squares, gardens and other public spaces becomes a vital business and marketing tool. For example, companies are usually attracted to locations that offer well-designed, well-managed public places and these in turn attract customers, employees and services. Moreover, a good public landscape also offers very clear benefits to the local economy in terms of stimulating increased house prices, since house-buyers are usually willing to pay to be near green space.
In conclusion, due to the aforementioned reasons, it is necessary to build such community places in towns and cities. I feel that gardens and public squares can help rejuvenate distressed inhabitants, as well as the area economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36144578313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90935047322 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5156180518 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246949730948 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805705009318 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534053543172 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155721088067 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07080068786 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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