Some people believe that successful sports teams are always those with the strongest or fittest players. Others think that success depends more on the team’s mental strength. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, everyone struggling to compete with others and try to taste victory. Some argue that players could win any sports with the help of their body strength, however, others are against them and saying that teamwork is an indispensable part of the success of a team. In this essay, I shall discuss both sides and give my opinion later on.
Mostly, outdoor sports are only possible with batter strength and stamina on the field. Strong body gestures provide more confidence to players, moreover, they could last long in the toughest match to the compititer. Moreover, a healthy individual could decide any tense situation quickly and accurately without wasting time. In a football match, for the instance, good stamina and a healthy body play as an energy booster for the players. And it acquires high possibilities to win the match without much effort.
On the flip side, it has been proved that teamwork is the most important part to achieve success at work or in a sport too. While playing any outdoor activity, some decisions are not made only by the captain of the team, at that time, all team players have to be on the same page about the decision made by the captain. As a consequence, payers play seriously as well as coordinate with other players and try to secure their victory by just playing the game with teamwork. I have convinced, by many magazines, that the success rate can increase by 10% if players play sport with teamwork.
To put it in a nutshell, extreme good strength and fit body contribute to the victory, although working or decisiding serious issue in a group also has much more effect to win any sport game. I, personally, believe that not only strong gesture but also group work should be there on ground field to secure success without any doubt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78846153846 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49261730429 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.688462989 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.714285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240127546344 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771988992547 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621630432832 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144274323587 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867775095565 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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