It is popular, these days, that a growing number of students have the high aspiration of studying abroad during either high school or university. In my opinion, this trend offers abroad students a wide range of knowledge in different areas and the full development of team-working and self-help ability.
On the one hand, the main reason leading students to study in foreign nations is the superior education which allows learners to have a series of chances for promotion their knowledge. For instance, many traditional parents, especially in Asia countries, wish their children to study abroad rather than in their own country. As abroad students approach a new environment, where citizens have a different language and different culture, they would have a series of opportunities to change themselves that help them mature.
At the same time, thanks to superior education, foreign students get used to self-study and team-working skills. Therefore, studying with foreigners helps abroad students develop soft skills like financial control. These skills play an essential role in real-life circumstances, especially in the workplace, it helps employers choose the most candidates for inadequate positions in the company.
In conclusion, studying abroad helps students not only adjust their behaviors toward learning but also offers many chances to improve their soft skills, so the advantages outweigh the disadvantages like culture shock.
- Around the world it is likely that more adults will work from home and more children will study from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible Do you think it is a negative or a positive development 73
- Some people think that countryside life is healthier while others believe that city is better in order to have a healthy lifestyle Discuss both views with your own perception 78
- More and more people are becoming seriously overweight Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate What do you think about this type of requirement Give details to support your opinion 74
- Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59817351598 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9014663023 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634703196347 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4095361271 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.222222222 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268716684336 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114082933327 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063532615441 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162816309132 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029137388708 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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