scientists have been warning for many years about protecting the environment and we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings,many people do not do this . What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?
In modern era, technology is developed day by day . Being warned from many years researchers claim that people are not worrying about the environment that they should use energy but in a limit . There are some reasons such as better lifestyle however, there are many solutions available for this worrying problem.
The supreme reason of this trend is that ,life standards , people do not care for environment because they may maintain only their living style such as , Ac ,people use Ac for better living, but it put detrimental effects on environment. Moreover, people are busy in works in which they need of much energy sources likewise, electricity and many factories and industries are available in these days which emit many harmful gases and those are very harmful for atmosphere. Therefore ,people use those objects which is not better for environment rather than use those things which keep environment.
There are some important solutions are available behind this problem. Firstly, Government should implement levy on using of high energy and conduct campaigns for giving knowledge about keep the atmosphere safe. Moreover, people should also take responsibility for this they should not throw plastic bags on main places and many others .
To conclude, I retriate my views by saying that, although people do not care for environment, Government should take some strict actions for this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29464285714 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64602157563 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6739976072 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361168064868 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142600571976 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885566321048 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224668677941 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469475094496 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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